Pretty good overall
Pretty good for a first track. Better than mine (Just about all of the tracks on my account are ones I made when I was, like, 10, but only uploaded just recently. Was that even correct grammar?). It took me a second to realize that the track was looping. Heh. Stupid me. Anyways, you seem to have learned FL Studio a lot faster than most people do. A lot of people download it, thinking it's ACID or something that you can just re-arrange audio files with. I made the mistake of uploading some songs like that. Again, they were my old ones. I use synths and crap now. But yeah, good job, I guess. Keep the songs coming.